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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 43
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Comments
A. F. Kay
I've made a note to make this clearer. Thank you!
A. F. Kay
Thank you so much!!!
A. F. Kay
Thank you!
Joe
LightNing arced from one of the creatures,
Daemon Shade
I'm not sure it's clear enough that he's using the spear to guide his fall. I was slightly confused in the next chapter, and had to come back to confirm there was a reason for his hand to be experiencing friction.
Daemon Shade
A couple instances of "lighting" instead of lightning. "as the plummeted closer" s/the/they I'd recommend hyphenating "instant cast" when he uses Fallen Heroes, to improve sentence cadence and readability, but I'm honestly not sure if that's grammatically correct or not.
