A. F. Kay
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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 54
🕑 Added 2022-02-26 08:59:12 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
A. F. Kay
Hmm, I'll look at that in my next pass. I think part of the problem is that I spent a lot of time doing other things than actually fighting. Thank you for the feedback!
A. F. Kay
You are exactly right. Ruwen would certainly get something. I've updated the story and he now grabs three of the spores. Thank you for the feedback!!!
A. F. Kay
Yay!!!
Cory Altman
This sequence went well and had a fast pace, but the conclusion seemed abrupt.
Rodney Carter
This isn't exactly a critique, and the story works perfectly fine without it, but.... when I saw that Ruwen was fighting a giant plant, my first thought was that he was going to collect a few epic (I forget the actual rating system for items) samples to give to Fractal and improve his collecting stat. I realize that when he gets back to Uru's blessing there are going to be a lot of stats and descriptions to go through, so it could be a conscious omit. I just love quirks like that (taking the divine grass actually made me laugh out loud a few books ago.)
Samuel Strode
Ok salt was a great idea
