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October 22, 2022 - Update

🕑 Added 2022-10-22 06:47:29 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

It is funny this should come up. More news about all that soon.

A. F. Kay

Great point. It is hard to judge without knowing the end. Thanks for the feedback.

A. F. Kay

Great points. My intention is for this book to be mainly about the Master's Trial.

Joe

I just usually trust that AFK has taken that into account and it will be resolved when we get to that part of the story. :-)

Christoph

Pacing feels always tricky - they spent quite a few weeks apart from their girlfriends, so it feels like we missed a lot what happened to/with them. But you could always use the different time dilation similar to Blapy to help with that

Adam Boshcoff

Great chapters this week! Pacing is hard to judge with weekly releases of chapters compared to reading the full book at once, but I haven’t felt anything was moving too slow or too fast so far. Really hard to say without knowing what else you need to squeeze into the book tho

Jeremiah Halstead

The pacing "feels" fine so far but I say that not knowing where you are going with this book. If this whole book is the masters trial and a conflict with the founders and echo in different wrap ups, it feels like you are on pace. If you are planning a change back to the black pyramid or grave, I feel like you've not paced for that unless it's so fast travel in the climax of something. Right now I feel like you are about mid to slightly passed mid (before reading chapters this week)


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