November 5, 2022 - Update
🕑 Added 2022-11-05 06:30:28 +0000 UTCHi!
Where did Fall go? We had more snow this week here in the Rocky Mountains and once again I find myself asking why Fall seems to be the shortest season by about two and a half months. I’m not ready for winter and it only reminds me that the year is almost over.
Last week’s chapters didn’t get a second pass before releasing and they went out with some decisions I plan on changing. I won’t get into specifics here as many readers aren’t following along on Patreon, but the short version is Ruwen won’t use spells in those chapters.
I also realized I had isolated him again, even if briefly, which is something I wanted to avoid after the heaping dose we got of that in the last book. A scene I really like came out of it though, and so I shortened the duration considerably instead of throwing it out. We will see if it survives in the final revision, but I find a lot of joy in the ways Ruwen, as strong and OP as he is, still has vulnerabilities.
A friend recommended a book to me because he thought I’d enjoy the dialogue. He was right, and I read Tattered Pawns by C. D. Corrigan in under three days, which is fast for me. A superbly crafted and well written fantasy book. I highly recommend it.
The Grey Warden finally released on audio, and I hope it finds an audience that loves it.
A lot of distractions this week related to a future move, but I managed to get a decent amount of writing done. Some of it I really love, too. But that is best left for next week’s update.
I am still way behind in responding to comments. I will do everything in my power to get that rectified this weekend.
I am also behind on sending out signed copies. I will address that this coming week as well. For those of you who have already gotten all the Divine Apostasy books, I ordered a big shipment of The Grey Warden, and will send those out as well.
I opened up chapters 34, 35, and 36 to Root.
I opened up chapters 37, 38, and 39 to Harvester.
I added chapters 40, 41, and 42 to Step Master, Blapy’s Favorite, and Divine.
Enjoy!
I appreciate you being here and supporting this series. It means so much to me. Thank you.
Take care,
AFK
Comments
Samuel Strode
And I want more
A. F. Kay
Wow that is a lot of material!!!!
Samuel Strode
As long as it doesn’t take time away from your writing I need to read more as well (nearly 2000 kindle books 1001 audiobooks some overlap and close to a 100 physical books) I need to read more as well more of your work don’t leave me in the lurch
A. F. Kay
You bet! I need to read more.
A. F. Kay
Glad you enjoyed them!
A. F. Kay
Excellent point!
A. F. Kay
You are welcome!
A. F. Kay
Thank you! I want to make the best story possible, and I never get it right the first time.
Samuel Strode
Thank you for the book recommendation
Darren Lee
Nope..Nope - Gotta read the chapters then I'll come back and post :) --- Ok. Read them. Fun! Fun!
Bob of Doom
That's because you're in the mountains. If you just live by the mountains you get less snow.
Rick White
Thank you for the chapters!
Adam Boshcoff
Great chapters this week (as always)! Glad to see you’re willing to go back and make changes :)