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HLP - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2022-11-12 07:34:57 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Great catch, Sam!

A. F. Kay

You are not alone. I think part of the reason people resent them is it takes away from the main story line. We don't have that issue and we get extra DA content. That is a winning deal.

A. F. Kay

I do this as well. I'm going to need to add it to my list of checks. Thanks for the attention to detail Nick!

A. F. Kay

I enjoy this too!

BRB

Yep, you're right! Right before they leave for Malth, she says she made it to the Chapel. Last time I looked, I didn't see that. I'll fix it.

Samuel Strode

Prayer Points: 0 this seems wrong I didn’t catch it my first read through but in legions fifth vault Ruwen and hammah both went to BP because they had tasks to do it was inferred that Hammah was going to donate things to the chapel for prayer points so 0 seems wrong

BRB

I hope so. Counting on you guys to let me know when I go off the rails.

Samuel Strode

You are doing fine and with you focusing on Hannah I think you will do the story justice

BRB

“Bewildered boyfriends.” That’s funny. I’ll have to try to work that in.

BRB

Excellent, thank you. It’s the real words that spell check never catches. Man.

BRB

Thanks, guys. I was very, very nervous about today. Haha.

Samuel Strode

I am not in general either because most of the time they kind of feel thrown together but I am liking this one so far

Namorat

Nice one, despite the fact I am not a fan of side stories in general ^^

Nick O'Roonling

"Shuttered" should be "shuddered"

Samuel Strode

It’s also nice to see similar abilities with different names being mentioned

Samuel Strode

Shade’s first rule: Wishful thinking’s ugly twin sister is disappointment.”- love the rule. Nerds I don’t think is the right word idiots maybe let’s go get our bewildered boyfriends


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