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November 26, 2022 - Update

🕑 Added 2022-11-26 08:35:05 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you everyone! I appreciate the feedback!

Daniel Greenfield

I honestly love the title. My thoughts were running in the direction of the seventh aspect

Rick White

Good title

Zargoran

Title sounds perfect, keeps in line with the others and makes me excited for the discoveries of the shadow steps

Adam Boshcoff

The title is great! Seems to have lots of layered implications

Joe

It's a good title. First, it makes me wonder about the Shadow Steps and their significance; How the Seventh one is related to Ruwen and what it's impact is on the whole story. It also promises me that I'm actually going to learn a lot more about these vaunted Shadow Steps that have been shrouded in mystery all this while. What's so magical about the Seventh one? Suddenly, the seventh shadow step is capitalized in my thinking. It also is in keeping with the naming convention you've established. The name is a great tease.

Lena M. Lucente

I am so grateful for your imagination and your skills as a writer. Your stories keep getting better and better. They keep me in that exciting world when I am not wanting to be in my reality. It helps me not to focus on feeling like crap. I wish I had dimensional chalk so I can make a door and go be with everyone. Maybe Hamma would heal me. Hehe I hope your ride home is a good one. Be safe and drive carefully cuz you have precious cargo on board. And yes, I like the title!

Samuel Strode

I like the title it matches the theme I have always enjoyed the play of words


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