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Divine Apostasy Book 7 - Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2022-08-01 06:14:20 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!

A. F. Kay

This is a mistake. Thank you!

A. F. Kay

Thank you very much!

A. F. Kay

Thanks!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!

Henscratch

“Ruwen hadn’t {know} if the sky here was whitish-grey” >known

Darren Lee

two cycle engine perhaps? Not sure on that comment but this book keeps getting BETTER and BETTER !!!

Daemon Shade

Minor point of confusion: since when do the viper steps alone end at the starting point?

Daemon Shade

"Ruwen hadn’t know if the sky here..." *known

Daemon Shade

"The tower looked just like Sift had described it. A smooth windowless cylinder climbing hundreds of feet into the air." I would recommend either separating these with a dash, or starting the second sentence with "It was".

Daemon Shade

"In the center of the open area stood a thick pillar fifteen-foot high." Correct me if I'm wrong here, but shouldn't the word order make it either "fifteen foot (high) pillar" or "pillar, fifteen feet high/tall"?

A. F. Kay

Excellent points. I will take care of both of these. Thank you!!!

BRB

Excellent chapters. The tree is very cool. And I love seeing Sift’s gift for the steps set off in comparison to normal people. Two small things: I wasn’t grounded in time until halfway through the chapter, unsure if this was the next morning before training or if it was the next afternoon after training. I got distracted wondering how Sift paid for the pasties from the vendor. I wasn’t aware he carried money. Did he hit up Ruwen for some coins?


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