A. F. Kay
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Divine Apostasy Book 8 - Chapter 47
🕑 Added 2023-06-03 06:26:24 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
A. F. Kay
Excellent point Nick! I think you are right that I didn't dwell on it enough. Do you think this is fixable in your opinion with a couple paragraphs contemplating the immenseness of the fix? Or is it just too sudden all together. Thanks again for the feedback!
Nick O'Roonling
This felt both too easy, and too underappreciated as a change. Ruwen's inability to use spirit had been a big feature for a while now; it massively impacted several fights and pretty much directly led to all those dead students. Now he's quickly fully healed (which feels a bit deus ex machina) and there doesn't seem to be the big emotional moment I would have expected from him getting his combat ability back.
Samuel Strode
That’s right I forgot about his massive regen
