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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Revised Prologue

🕑 Added 2024-01-13 09:01:49 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thanks for the feedback! You are right about the time of Ruwen's training...I'll fix it. Thank you!

A. F. Kay

I love we are getting to Rami's secrets. They are leading to something big.

Lena M. Lucente

I loved it. Me personally, I wanted more when I reached the end. Loved the fact Rami has secrets that Ruwan doesn't know about. This is so exciting! Good work.

Joe

Oh, there it is! It's a good recap, and I like the way you do it - often, I don't read recaps because they are dry and don't really fit into the story - they stand alone. The way you did it here makes it a natural part of the story. I think that's very good. It is long. Very long. But we already knew that, and I don't think it's a bad thing in itself. The important thing is that it all remained interesting and pertinent. One thing, though: I thought Ruwen's step training in the spirit realm had more than 2 years? I thought it was something like 4 years or so? Apart from that, I think you did a very good job of it. I believe if someone actually starts reading it, they won't TLDR it. There is good and interesting stuff there.

Jeremiah Halstead

I like it but I think the recap is longer than I personally would like.


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