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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2023-08-12 09:57:48 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Yeah, I really created an issue with that.

Jake Schmitt

Haha good limiting factor for the time dilemma I was hoping that this would be addressed all the time in the Universe at the tip of their portal chalk, not so much now

Jonathan Barnett

I will add that there is one bit of the logic here that seems to fail. When Miranda initially granted Ruwen access to her realm to advance, she postulated that it might take several centuries for him to do so. He completed the transition in ~100 years, so it seems like an additional 30 years would leave him well below any threshold that caused problems. Perhaps she did not realize how much of an issue the extended stays would produce at the time, so this is new information for her?

Jonathan Barnett

I like the constraint that’s applied to Ruwen’s use of Miranda’s realm since it introduces a basis for him not relying on it too extensively as a means of advancing his abilities. Absent that literary device, his rationale for not doing so would be unclear.


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