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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2023-08-12 10:12:08 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

This is subtle, but I wanted Ruwen to hear how it was done and because it was all mental stuff I just show him doing it. His mental strength more than enough to perform the directions. Maybe I need to have someone react to it sooner or make it more obvious.

A. F. Kay

thank you!!!!!!

BRB

"Ruwen willed the three defeated troopers into his soul space..." ____________________________ Unless I missed it, in the last chapter Chip told him how to make the soul vault, but Ruwen didn't actually attempt to create one. And Chip wasn't going to instruct him on moving things in/out until after Ruwen had forged the pocket.

Julene May

End of part that starts with, The trooper collapsed to the side.... think "allow" needs to be "alloy".

Joe

They are ideal training for him. Hopefully, he gets strong quickly from the practice. I like the fact that Ruwen will likely become more skilled in using all his new powers from this.

Joe

Fundamentally is right. Hopefully, this will put Ruwen further ahead of the other dieties.

Nick Pincus

Well I think it's very fair to say the game has changed fundamentally.

Pannath

If they survive, these seem to be good enemies to train against. They've Identified weaknesses that he didn't know he had. The idea of taking some of those anti Harmony devices back to train with is good. Though he should keep them FAR away from Miranda.