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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2023-08-19 06:44:31 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Yes! Thank you!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jake Schmitt

From those buildings what percentage have interior lights, bathrooms, showers, living quarters, kitchens, chairs, food stores, or any item remotely associated with the needs of the living. Should this be a question mark at the end?

BRB

__________________ "Simpler than that, actually, Rami replied. The Luminara use souls, the Radiant use Chakras, and the Harmonic must start with neither because if they don’t complete something called an identity lattice after a thousand years, they must become one of the other two." _________________ "If I had to guess, Rami said, it’s because they’re valuable. The Luminara and Radiants are common, and Harmonics are rare." ____________________ It's hard to judge this since I've read the old version, but I think a new reader would want an earlier explanation for how Rami and Lir know some of the things explained in the above quotes. A new reader wouldn't know about the quests and might get stuck wondering how a few log entries (or whatever they imagine is in the hidden displays) would give so much information. I think just having Ruwen wonder the same thing might prevent that moment of the reader stopping in confusion. It's not a huge deal since you explain it later in the chapter, though.