A. F. Kay
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Divine Apostasy Book 9 - Chapter 39
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Comments
A. F. Kay
Thank you so much!!!!
A. F. Kay
I am going to rework this chapter.
Jake Schmitt
"Had Realm Zipper sensed his gaze?" I think this should be "Had the Realm Zipper sensed his gaze?"
A. F. Kay
Probably a mistake. I will look at this for clarity. Thanks!
A. F. Kay
Many of the conversations are internal and are italicized. Are you not seeing the italicized text?
Pannath
This chapter also needs to be edited, there are no quotation marks for start and stop of people talking
BRB
from the previous chapter: We can’t outrun it using only six dimensions, Tarot said. Lir, can you guess how much time we have? Less than an hour. from this chapter: Okay, Tarot said. We’re in place. I’m using the closest sixth dimension touch points to keep us in a mostly straight line as we retreat. It’s slower than longer steps but it’s the only way I can keep us aligned. The good thing is the steps are so short you won’t notice them, but the bad news is we now have hours not days to figure this out. Is this a mistake or am I misunderstanding what they’re talking about?
