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Divine Apostasy Book 10 - Chapter 38

🕑 Added 2024-06-22 06:05:32 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Excellent point!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A. F. Kay

thank you! Fixed!

Jake Schmitt

😆 great chapter! It was nice to see Ruwen get a win without losing something or someone important. Just some little bobos to his core.

Jake Schmitt

"Uru had sealed the man’s memories of the Spirit Realm away." Miranda did this for Lylan's coin from the spirit Realm not Uru.

Jake Schmitt

"We need to consider just unhiding the System for everyone" this sentence feels weird. Maybe, reveal the system, or something like that

A. F. Kay

Haha this is hilarious...and true. I love the backpack.

John

“After he recovered from the Shadow Step practice” 😂😂 The absolute disconnect between Ruwen and the enormity of manhandling a God is high tier disrespect to all the so called powerhouses of this universe. Ruwen could make the most absurd but legitimate threats to deities and have them genuinely shaking, “listen bub, my brain is a million times bigger than yours and if you don’t obey me I’ll brain zap ya or poke ya in the wrong places or better yet cut ye down with a merry tune” then Ruwen proceeds to stuff the God in some chest facing chihuahua backpack

Ori Shifrin

I understand. Maybe flesh out the offhand comments in the following chapter? Ruwen says it went as expected,a bit boring really?

A. F. Kay

I understand this feeling and was/am concerned about it. I almost never do this. I tend to show everything as the progression is my favorite part. In this book I've experimented with both a montage and skipping what I considered the least interesting part of that interaction. Ruwen had already won. Perhaps it can be a short story sometime. Similar to Ruwen and Bliz's herb gathering trips.

Ori Shifrin

Soo,Ruwen fought Cleo.. last chapter,but no details of Cleo yielding or the immediate aftermath,just a jump? Feels a bit abrupt,like a chapter is missing