Patrefans
A. F. Kay from patreon
A. F. Kay patreon

Divine Apostasy Book 10 - Chapter 42-50 (Group 1)

🕑 Added 2024-06-29 11:04:06 +0000 UTC

Comments

A. F. Kay

Thank you! You just made it. Clarified that. Now its off to Travis.

Jake Schmitt

In chapter 46 they are talking again about resources and I ment to comment on it before but can Ruwen's creation Role not make any of these resources?

A. F. Kay

Here is the new text: Sift and Io had the dumbest conversations imaginable. During Ruwen’s Fortification to Angel in Blapy’s Divine Realm Sift had finished his transition into Jade first. He’d unfortunately witnessed Ruwen’s headless body as it finished reforming. This had evidently sparked a series of stories from Io about heads that used their ears to walk around. Ruwen wondered how many newly Fortified gods rose from their transition to be greeted with such a discussion.

A. F. Kay

This is from the stupid conversation Io and Sift were having in the only chapter that is from Sift's PoV in book 8. It was because while Ruwen's body was reforming into a divine body he didn't have a head for awhile. I'll add some context. Thank you!!!!

A. F. Kay

That's too funny.

Scott Emery

Chapter 44: the introduction of the ear walking head threw me. The issue is that Ruwen and Hamma's reactions are more like they know what he is talking about than he is introducing something new and bizarre. So I spent 30 minutes rereading to look for antecedents. Maybe it was referenced before and I just missed it? Either way, it broke me out of the narrative.

Samuel Strode

I read an interview with an structural engineer he said if SE’s had it there ways all buildings would be square—You and Overlord are like two boys with blocks—everything you build is square.”

A. F. Kay

I had intended to incorporate Cevin's Sword as well, but my outline changed. What I have planned for book 11 will be far more epic anyway.

Samuel Strode

The Grey warden!

A. F. Kay

This will be a short story in the future.

abirami nandagopal

I would really really like more details on Bliz and Ruwen's adventure and about that big hammer. Still half way through the chapters, so hoping to come across the complete story soon.


More Creators