A. F. Kay
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June 29, 2024 - Update 2
🕑 Added 2024-06-29 19:16:19 +0000 UTCHi!
I’m starting my final revision for book 10 now. Please leave a comment, or message me, or ping me on discord, if you find any problems. Meeting this narration deadline was difficult. I’m so happy its almost behind me.
Oh, and when you come across a scene where action is referenced but now shown (there are a couple…one with Ruwen and a god, and one with Ruwen and Bliz) these are opportunities I left myself for short stories and anthologies or just Patron only extras.
I’m also very interested in what people thought of book 10 as a whole and the ending.
I opened up book 10 chapters Group 2 for Root
I opened up BPL chapter 3 and 4 for Root.
I opened up BPL chapters 5, 6, and 7 for Harvester.
I opened up book 10 chapters Group 3 for Harvester
I added BPL chapters 8, 9, and 10 for Step Master, Blapy’s Favorite, Divine, and Axiom.
More Black Pyramid Legends chapters can be found at: https://www.patreon.com/BRBea/posts
Enjoy!
Thank you for being here. It’s hard to express how much I appreciate you. I know if she had the time, Blapy would invite each of you to a coloring party.
Take care,
AFK
Comments
A. F. Kay
Thank you Jackson, that is exactly right. I will add a sentence to add clarity around those steps come from a different Clan.
A. F. Kay
Will start focusing on Ash for a few weeks, then do both Ash and book 11.
A. F. Kay
Haha. Love the title. My guess is new book 11 chapters in early August.
Jackson Klean
Shattered Steps are the Steps that Lalquinrial is versed in. There are of the God-Killer variety, specialized in destroying meridians like the Shadow Steps. We don't know much about the Shattered Clan beyond Lalquinrial being part of it. This is mentioned, I think, in Ruwens first meeting with the Infernal God. I am still amazed that I remember this bit of fact considering that this is someone else's lore rather than my own.
Zachary Gordon
Fantastic book! Loved everything! Here are a few comments/typos: 1) Chapter 63: there are two places where you use the formal (capitalized) term “Shattered Step(s)”… I assume you’re referring to Shadow Steps since they can be used to shatter meridians but I think this is the first time that you actually called them “Shattered Steps” and I wasn’t sure if that was intentional or a typo, as you used this term twice in this chapter. 2) Chapter 65- “What if I let the destruction in early?” Ruwen said. “Or put some inside me and tried to control…” Small typo here: The word “tried” should be “try”
Luther bittinger
I want more please and thank you
Matthew Dellsite
Great ending! Can't wait until the first chapters of The Eleventh Crayon and the continuing adventures of Rue In.
A. F. Kay
thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
frankie doerr
Great job on the ending there and enjoy your break don’t burn yourself out yet I need more books
A. F. Kay
not the coloring...i'm just a big fan of mysterious portals
A. F. Kay
me too!
Lena M. Lucente
How did you know I Love Coloring!!!! I would walk right through that portal if Blapy sent one.
