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Divine Awakening - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-02-03 10:06:53 +0000 UTC

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smore

I haven't started reading this story yet, but I'd like to ask will this story be on Audible?

A. F. Kay

No reason to apologize. I really do appreciate constructive criticism and I happen to be overly sensitive to this issue as I didn't get as much time as I wanted to make everything "perfect" whatever that is.

Scott Emery

Sorry to use a sledgehammer when a polite knock would have worked. Anothet author I used to Patreon with had a sharp decline in writing quality and became totally unresponsive to comments. I should not have let that affect my communication with you. Apologies.

A. F. Kay

I've had second thoughts about my previous post. Thanks for the feedback!

Scott Emery

Just want to point out that from a reader/listener of DA only, the transition into Ash is a little bit forced, but the transition back to the mainstream DA seemed abrupt and nonsensical. I was left wondering what objective Ruwen accomplishes in his little side-jaunt to Earth. I mean, he meets with Echo and makes Viper signs and.... Well, next thing I know he's back in his own stomping grounds and it's as though the little trip to Earth never happened. I like the idea of an Ash spin off, but it shouldn't be spliced into the original series so callously. Characters can't act outside their context or I start to disbelieve the story and lose interest. I'm this case the puppet strings are't just showing, they are glowing a bright neon green.

A. F. Kay

Yay!

Samuel Strode

This has me hooked


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