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Divine Awakening - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2024-02-03 10:10:36 +0000 UTC

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Lonnie

Oh blappy, always making an entrance 😆

BRB

oh wow i just understood that sentence. he’s quoting grandma. flew right over my head. never mind my comment. carry on

A. F. Kay

Thank you!

A. F. Kay

I will look at this

Robert Gunnlaugsson

Ch 2 - Correction “…before cutting to one of the protesters holding a picture of teenage girl around Ash’s age.” -> before cutting to one of the protesters holding a picture of a teenage girl around Ash’s age.

Bob of Doom

I don't think so? Martial Law is using the explicit threat of violence to control the population. It's why it's called Martial, because it means war/war-like. Where Marshall is a name. Continuation: the scenario is an American talking to an American. Now The Marshall Law could be a new law that came into being because of the Clypse. But if you're going to reference that you need to explain that.

Samuel Strode

I think it depends upon the region that you are writing for Europe would be Marshall Law

BRB

Something is missing from this sentence: "Bamboo Viper Clan this, family secret that, his grandpa said a lot of crazy crap, so who knew if any of it was true."

Bob of Doom

Marshall law? Or martial law?


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