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Divine Apostasy Book 10 - Prologue

🕑 Added 2024-03-01 06:37:12 +0000 UTC

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William WIlson

I'm glad you changed this but this. We definitely need more context to understand this. Even after everything from book 11 this doesn't quite make sense.

Samuel Strode

I am going to find that shirt

A. F. Kay

Haha. My youngest daughter got me a shirt that says: There are two types of people in the world. 1) Those that can extrapolate from incomplete data. And that's all the shirt has. I love it so much.

Samuel Strode

I have that same issue a to b b to c etc etc a happens and I talk about e and every looks confused until I explain

A. F. Kay

I need to do a better job of setting that scene. I have too much in my head that no one else knows so it comes across as confusing I think.

Samuel Strode

This is from the other realm that he found it’s an interesting perspective a lot of is new and not fully understandable in the wider world but this snippet is understandable in the small part that is shown

A. F. Kay

That is great feedback. Thank you! I will keep that in mind when I rewrite this. Zylkin is the Gloom Stalker Ruwen met in book 7 in the swamp and it is implied although never stated directly that the three Sisters learned the shadow steps from him. I will work some of that in to help give it context.

Lena M. Lucente

I was not understanding what I was reading until the end. And even at the end I didn't know what to think.

A. F. Kay

what are you thinking? do you not like it?

John

2 a.m hmms

Lena M. Lucente

Hmmm


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