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Divine Awakening - Chapter 20

🕑 Added 2024-04-06 08:01:06 +0000 UTC

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Rodney Carter

I'm just catching up on this one and I'm really enjoying it so far. Please don't make the captain fall for the 16 year old. I could see it if it was just a throw away comment because it's charisma is abnormally high (is it?), but anything other than immediately shutting it down feels creepy. If their love story is intergal to the story, could you age him up at least to 18 (if not the same age as ruwen)? You've already established that time flows differently in different areas of space. I kinda already assumed that was the case, as I thought ash was much younger at their first meeting (but I could just be misremembering)

Douglas Davis

Im a combat vet but I only mentioned it because I know you seem to care about details. But no one should get upset over getting a few details wrong, veteran or not. Its fantasy.

A. F. Kay

Thanks for the clarification. I'm trying my hardest to avoid too many details because I know how upsetting getting things wrong is for those that have served. We will get some background on the captain soon that will make things a little more clear. She has some special skills and was placed in a special unit with a higher rank.

Douglas Davis

So she's an almost 19 year old who has already obtained the rank of O3/CPT in the army? Not unless she graduated from highschool around 13, and did two years of AP college credit classes while she was in highschool.

Joe

I think it's that Persephone isn't "possibly sapient" but rather, "DEFINITELY sapient." Though I may be wrong.

BRB

"She felt guilty keeping a secret like this from Colonel Rogers because he’d jeopardized his career by supporting her." I'm not sure what secret she's keeping. Didn't they discuss that Persephone is sapient in front of the colonel on the helicopter?

Kelly Burton

You have entirely captured my attention with this new saga, AFK. I devoured chp 1-20 in a single go and now feel compelled to do similarly with volume 9. Dude! Insufficient time and all that!

BloodStorm

This is cool of the Ai really is Lir. It would be sweet if he made some earth tv references in the DA book I’m really loving the ash story.

frankie doerr

Good for lir

Lena M. Lucente

Maybe this is Lir's chance for another family?!!!

Jeremiah Halstead

Oh Lir is going to be super excited


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