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Cevin's Sword Cover Reveal
🕑 Added 2024-05-18 00:39:07 +0000 UTCI would love feedback on the cover and especially the series name. I'm not the biggest fan of "Academy of Living Weapons."
I know it's hard to think of a name without reading the book, but I'll place the blurb below to give you an idea of what the book is about.
I will post the book later tonight.
Here is the blurb:
Adventure calls to twelve-year-old Cevin as he enters the Hall of Glory, where legendary weapons await their destined wielders. With dreams of heroism, Cevin yearns to wield an epic blade to save the kingdom and free his captured brother.
Cevin’s elation when a weapon speaks to him crumbles when he discovers it’s nothing like he imagined. This seemingly unremarkable artifact is not only far from epic—it carries dire news of a dark conspiracy brewing within the Academy of Living Weapons.
Thrust into the Academy’s mysterious corridors, Cevin must master his unconventional weapon and navigate treacherous alliances. With each revelation, Cevin unravels secrets about his family and himself, discovering that the wisdom he once scorned is essential for his survival.
Faced with a looming threat to the kingdom, Cevin embraces his unique heritage. As the lines between friend and foe blur, Cevin learns that true power comes from a surprising source and that the hero he wants to be isn't necessarily the hero the kingdom needs.
In Cevin's Sword, embark on a journey of self-discovery, where the line between destiny and desire blurs, and where every challenge conceals an opportunity to embrace one’s power. True strength lies not in what you wield, but in who you choose to become.
Comments
Joe
If that's referring to the Hall of Glory, then the name is slightly lacking something. The name should hint at mystery yet to come. You know? Like "Divine Apostasy." DA made me wonder who was this Divine? What apostasy? From whom? How? When? Etc. I just think a really good name should evoke the imagination and make promises of future greatness yet to be born.
A. F. Kay
Thank you everyone for the suggestions. How do people feel about something simple like: "Living Armory Book 1"
Elle Mahaney
Holy mother of god AFK, how do you do it? I love it. Also, a bit dramatic, but for the series title, how about: “The Pillars of Fate”? Not sure how that fits with the rest of the arc though.
AKA_Kira
oh side note, the rest of the cover is gorgeous
AKA_Kira
I think the word Living is what feels off to me, my suggestion might be something like: Academy of Awakened Weapons
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I was going to say the same thing about it focusing the entire series on the Academy. For example… that super famous story about a boy with the scar isn’t titled ‘Hogwarts’ for a reason. I like your second suggestion a lot.
Joe
I like that last one
Samuel Strode
Pretty sure Travis I booked for the next decade and another author said Travis doesn’t book that far out
Bob of Doom
So going without the blurb: it's real good when you combine the book's name and the series' name. Because you instantly understand this is a story about a kid who gets a magic talking sword, and that's always fun. The blurb makes it sound pretty bog-standard academy fantasy. I will say it's obvious the sword isn't that powerful since it doesn't have the key to a strong name. A single word that implies something but doesn't mean anything. Like the Throngler. You never want to get on the wrong side of the Throngler.
Hexo
I have a few names that came to mind What the Blades discover A Swords intent Truth or belief A Weapons Soul The Sword of Reckoning Please let me know if you like any of these or I can try an think u; some more names if you have something specific in mind
Matt Swiatek
Thank you for sharing the blurb! Based on the themes and storyline you've described, the series name "Academy of Living Weapons" might indeed feel a bit cumbersome and possibly misleading, as it suggests a focus primarily on the academy itself rather than Cevin's personal journey and the broader narrative. Here are a couple of alternative series name suggestions that might capture the essence of your story more effectively: 1. **Legacy of the Unseen Blade** - This title highlights the unexpected nature of Cevin's weapon and hints at the underlying themes of unrecognized or hidden strengths and destinies. 2. **Echoes of Destiny** - This series name suggests a focus on the unfolding destinies of the characters, resonating with the themes of prophecy, heritage, and the impact of past actions on present choices. Each of these titles aims to reflect the deeper narrative you’ve outlined, focusing on personal growth, hidden truths, and the interplay between predestined paths and personal choice.
Lena M. Lucente
Please tell me you'll have Travis be the narrator?
Lena M. Lucente
I like it. I can't wait to read it.
Joe
The name evokes questions, wonder, and the imagination. Why would weapons need an Academy? What do they learn there? What kind of weapons are they? How are they used? Do they own themselves or does someone own them? I would keep the name if I was deciding it. - this was without reading the blurb. Some of these questions, of course, are answered by the blurb! Lol.
Joe
This is absolutely beautiful
A. F. Kay
Also a huge shout out to BRB who created magic with the typography and filtering.
