A. F. Kay
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CS - Chapters 21 to 25
🕑 Added 2024-05-18 02:33:40 +0000 UTCChapter 21
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A. F. Kay
Me too. I think I still am.
A. F. Kay
Thank you!!!!
Lonnie
To be fair, I was very naïve when I was twelve as well 😅
Lonnie
set Lid d own and glanced at the scribes again. They still hadn’t focused on me. Down is broken
Lena M. Lucente
DA spoiled me. It did get better and I found myself excited to read on. I was surprised and saddened when I read the last line. I thought I had more to read. I hope that this is not the end of this story.
A. F. Kay
If I had time to rewrite the book I would tone that down some. It is what it is though...and probably accurate for what is basically a military academy. I would expect a significant amount of people to quit.
Lena M. Lucente
Ok, now the real exciting stuff starts. I was starting to get mad at the story for being so aggressive towards the main character who knows nothing of what's going on around and to him. Finally some king of answers/help has arrived. I was getting so frustrated by chapter 20 that I almost didn't continue. But I liked Cevins character so much, that I'm glad I continued.
Samuel Strode
In my martial arts classes they said the slower you train the faster you are when you need it
