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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2024-11-23 06:39:56 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you for the feedback!!!!!

Lonnie

I'm sure it'll get fixed in the edit. You can tell the author has been distracted by life. The pacing is all over the place. The published books have a fast paced consistency. This one and Ash's books are significantly slower. We're halfway through and just getting to the first trial of the first tower. Although some of the reveals are neat, a lot don't have any context to make the significance relevant right now

Natox Biohazard

The beginning of this chapter is a little disjointed with the previous chapter

King Nereus

Yeah, that’s badass.

Samuel Strode

Nice


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