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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 39

🕑 Added 2024-12-08 01:52:14 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Yeah, I hear you. My intent isn't to make this into a tower climb. Or five tower climb. haha.

King Nereus

Cheesing your way through fights is still winning I guess. Haha To be fair, the dungeon was being pretty unfair / over compensating it seems. Since this dungeon boss had the prize Ruin was looking for, perhaps we don’t need to remain in this tower much longer? I guess I am also looking forward to the dungeon crawl being over.

A. F. Kay

Thanks for the feedback! *****SMALL SPOILER****** ************************* I have no intention of Ruin climbing 1,000 levels in five towers. As you said that is more for perspective right now. He has a deadline of thirty days where he needs to accomplish some important things which relate to the original arc of the series, not the Outerverse. I'm not sure if that helps with your concerns. Without the whole book it is hard for you to judge. Thanks again for your honest feedback.

Lonnie

This story is turning into dbz and not in the good way. As a reader, I'm getting bored with the minutiae. Six chapters for the first floor of one thousand, of the first tower of five. At this point of the story Ruin doesn't necessarily need to go from zero to hero. That was part of the appeal with your books, was the pacing. In 11 books Ruwen was able to close the gap and stand toe to toe with the pinnacle of his universe. I also get you're trying to illustrate the difference between universe's, where peak from one is worse than first floor of the other. Please don't take this as me being critical of your work. I want you to succeed! I'm just giving feed back from my point of view.

Dustin Sago

Uh oh


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