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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2025-01-04 05:55:12 +0000 UTC

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Eithra

Work around. Have the runes be able to taken, but placed at a latter date. - Witch seems to the direction u have taken when talking to deaths tower avatar the second time. Reading to the end of the book. OR Have Ruin find the runes first, then met the tower in his head. Ask to leave without placing them. 😀

Samuel Strode

In MS word you can change that is settings on how formal you want to write I assume other word processors have similar settings

A. F. Kay

Haha!

A. F. Kay

Haha. Yeah, not using them is very difficult. You can always spot a new author because they never use them even in dialogue because all the editing tools want you to get rid of them.

A. F. Kay

Thanks for the feedback. I will make a note of this and see if I can improve things on my revision.

Eithra

I'm confused. He didn't take the Runes, then started anouther dungeon. Then left, now is not going back for a while. I would think the dungeon would be mad regardless of Ruin shaking things up. Seems rude, to the dungeon. Would the black pyramid dungeon let him get away with this behavior? Would she just reset the dungeon as a slight that real treasure was not taken ?

Samuel Strode

Lir is a properly spoken individual I do not think even can speak in contractions I myself love them and find it hard not to speak in them

Lonnie

Damn it lir! 😄


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