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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2024-09-07 07:37:18 +0000 UTC

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B-Slam

So the bond Ruin shares will Rami allows ruin to use passive affects for the perception codex's. Are the codex's awakening bloodline related? Dose that mean when Ruin gets passive bloodline abilities they will be shared with Rami. Besides the void passive they both already have. The chapter imo reads fine to be honest.

Scott Emery

I actually like this info-dump, mostly. My problem is I am left very uncertain about what it means. Unclear: * Has Ruin gained new powers, or just the potential for new powers? * Does he have to gather up a bunch of shards and gems now? What does adding a gem do? Where exactly are these gems added? Is there a physical structure somewhere or is it in his brain somehow? * Doesn't he have pillars all around him that are opened? Why is it hard to get to all the pillars? Are his nearby pillars actually portals to the outerverse? A lot of this uncertainty could be fixed be having Ruin experiment a bit as he reads this text.

Samuel Strode

Oh come on it’s Ruwen excuse Ruin something new and unexpected happens he is going to over analyze everything he will be forced to do something next chapter

John

I really can't wait to see Ruin interact with entities from the Outerverse. That quest reward where he's required to go to a spire for testing sounds monumental, and interacting with a Destruction Emperor, house Val'dor and the rest and getting to see their reactions to the existence that is Ruin is exciting. Ruin has previously stated that he's putting his development of Harmony on standby until he can equal it with his understanding of Chakras and this blood magic so I guess this story turn is more than just a side quest, and will likely be something that goes throughout the whole book and beyond? Gosh, he still has the Inklord conclave to attend and probably a lot of Grave deities who are becoming more interested in his activities.

Lonnie

Have you seen some of the longer running animes? They do the same thing. A whole chapter devoted to advancing the plot one step. I wouldn't worry about it too much.

Sean C Jackson

It's all fine, as long as the final chapter is a bit longer so Ruin can actually do some stuff instead of just reading stuff.

Lonnie

There goes our guy Ruin, breaking know rules by existing. He has so many things to balance. So the nodes will be how he brings his blood magic up to par, I wonder if all these shocks to his system will unlock is chakras. Hmm, is that why Ash has cursed blood and has unlocked chakras? One of his ancient ancestors was a survivor from the destruction realm and escaped the unending war into this weak universe to retire in peace because of a tyrant emperor? On a side note, kudos for keeping this straight. If these stories are intended to run parallel like they appear to be doing. You should pick Will Wight's brain about issues he had with his Killers and Kings series. It may save you some editing and heartache


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