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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2024-10-05 05:18:01 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Very good point. I'm going to think about that. I think you are right about Phoenix.

John

I'm guessing Ruin included Phoenix on his list for ascension because of their prior interactions, friendly/diplomatic relations, Phoenix almost being Divine himself and on a meta level because Phoenix is important to the Divine Awakening storyline. That being said, hasn't it been quite a while since readers are likely to have thought about him due to how far back he last showed up in the story? That length of time almost makes it feel like his inclusion is coming out of left field. It gets a little more confusing when I think about the group of people Ruin added to his consideration after the primary group, he thought about Uru, Tremine and Ky but not Uru's champions? Phoenix before the champions? I don't have any problems with it, it's just a thought I had. I'm willing to bet you have other ideas for the champions like keeping them relatable power wise to Graves gen pop since I don't imagine you plan on letting Ruin make everyone a God right away.

A. F. Kay

Ugh. Thank you so much! Its hard to catch all the mistakes I make dictating. Thanks for keeping me honest!

Joe

Yeah.

abirami nandagopal

"Valora had made it sound like his impending death was assured". I think it's Deryssa instead of Valora. Also I think Varthon spelled as Varnoth.

Samuel Strode

Feels like the apex of the first arc…

Lena M. Lucente

DUN DUN DUN


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