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Divine Apostasy Book 11 - Chapter 32

🕑 Added 2024-11-23 06:38:35 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you for the feedback! I'll look at that.

A. F. Kay

Thank you for the feedback!!!!! I appreciate it!

Scott Emery

Recommend pushing this paragraph 1 spot earlier. 'Of the nine Notifications Ruin had received, Deryssa had only gotten two of them. ..." I had to reread this section a few times before I caught that Ruin had transitioned back to the dungeon. Later I was wondering how he got into an environment with stalagmites and such. A disorienting 'what did I miss?' moment.

Lena M. Lucente

Oh so good.

Samuel Strode

Had to read the chapter twice state intent was a little confusing how did he trigger that in the dungeon?


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