Side by sides!
🕑 Added 2021-07-08 17:28:53 +0000 UTCPage 3 remains pretty much the same but page 4 needed a paneling overhaul
Comments
Kid Chaos
I love the part where sheβs trying very hard not to laugh. π
Suzubelle-chan
I really like the new angle the last panel on page three takes, I feel like it adds more depth to the scene. Also love all the close-ups to Kizarasunga, I think it adds more to her emotions and expressions. But then again, I just love seeing our Tigress Queen's face.
ABunchOTrees
Page 4 is VASTLY improved!
tamtheotter
De tigers are smaller! Omg loving being able to compare the new/old pages
Keliana Tayler
It's fascinating to see how different angles, panel composition, and character gestures can change the feel of a page. Thank you so much for sharing these! I am most definitely taking notes!
Diana Kinikin
My bisexual panic continues
Jack Newbill
The first panel of page 4 as well. Khazra just looks more menacing in general on that page.
Luci
I love both versions π
Areyla
I absolutely LOVE her grin in the last panel of the rework of page 4! It is pure trouble. π
Talizmyn (Ness)
Loving these changes. :D