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TQ 69 side by side
🕑 Added 2021-09-18 16:13:44 +0000 UTCI think I mentioned it before but I'm working my way backwards through the pages now so that I could get the simpler edits out of the way sooner. I'm not really going to be showing the side-by sides of most of the later pages because they shouldn't be nearly as drastic as the early ones but this one needed some particular tlc. I don't even know what I was going for with the needlessly complicated and distracting background.
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Kid Chaos
βHelp me, Obi-Wan Pillow-bi; youβre my only hope.β π
Suzubelle-chan
Changing the background in the third panel really helps convey his emotional turmoil. I especially like it since blue scratches contrasting with the red scratches weβve seen with angry characters. The close up on Jintu is fantastic too! Especially since his hair is a bit messier so you can tell he isnβt ready to meet the queen.
ABunchOTrees
All of his expressions are so much better in the second version.
Miki Kadubec
I love his face in the last panel π₯° He looks so scared panda!
