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Work in Progress Update 13 is now available!

🕑 Added 2024-06-01 12:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Nomax

Don't need to send me a screenshot. I know what's wrong since i changed that background to the newer panorama backgrounds, but didn't scale them accordingly in older scenes. But yes, thank you very much again for your keen eye! Should all be fixed now and will be implemented in the full v13 release. It's just so easy to miss stuff when you've been staring at the text for so long. So I really really appreciate you helping fish out a few more errors to get sorted out. :)

Azure

I also have a screenshot to share about a messed up background in a scene post flogging? It appears like only the bottom half of the background works, I could DM you on Twitter with a screenshot to give a visual, if you'd like? Might be intentional? Unsure.

Azure

Additional typo "Is that not the rub? I'm being brought over by my patron, who desire that I work on her estate in the south." An option actually has a typo "Julian, what would you have wanted Wolf do if you had won?" Capitalization: "Just don't get too excited. harbor districts are notorious..."

Azure

Capitalization and potentially punctualization "He emerges, sword drawn from its scabbard. whispering "For King and Country" in their ear..." (whispering to be capitalized; maybe a comma after country within quotation marks?). Capitalization: ""what's available"... I didn't realize I was so highly valued." General fixing: "Because, by your own admission, you almost managed did" ('Managed to' or 'did' presumably instead of the mix)

Nomax

Hey hey, thank you very much. Will get them sorted out. :)

Azure

Upon a reread of some parts I saw a typo, "I appreciate your thought, but in future you will only help passengers when necessary. You are a sailor, not their personal butler." A possible dialect difference or alternatively a typo: "You sigh and humor, taking a breath and joining in for the end of the song once more" alongside "Yeah, well, and you better become one of the gentlemen if you want that over molasses..." Minor capitalization error "Perce mentioned Alcohol." Typos also include: "You duck under the gunwhale of the overturned boat and scoot underneath it...and you feel a naul prodding your lower back, but you make do." ('...' indicating some portion was cut for brevity to get to the typo while still providing context) (Apparently, it's gunwale not gunwhale but I notice naul first instead of nail)


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