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Character Hair Question

🕑 Added 2019-03-09 02:38:40 +0000 UTC
Character Hair Question

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Novus

Thanks for the feedback! And for the welcome back too! As for the specifics, I'll take the easy ones first: Curves: This is actually the pose's fault, not the basic design. Front-on poses like this don't show curves very well, which is part of the reason I hate drawing them. Unfortunately, since this is a basic 'talk' pose that needs to fit in a wide set of situations, it has to be pretty basic >_<. :-="" _="" a="" able="" accurate="" actually="" adult="" and="" annnnnddd="" answer="" are.="" arrggg="" as="" base="" based="" be="" because="" being="" better="" bit="" blunt...you="" but="" can="" change="" chin="" chin:="" chose="" color="" color.="" completely="" correct="" cosplay="" counter="" darnit.="" definitively="" depth="" depth:="" didn="" do="" don="" down="" easy="" end="" enough="" entire="" essentially="" even="" face="" facial="" fall="" figure="" figuring="" fix="" fixed="" flat="" for="" from="" fully="" giraffe="" go="" had="" hair="" hair:="" hairstyle="" has="" have="" haven="" her="" here.="" hers="" hope="" hoped="" how="" i="" if="" image="" in="" into="" is="" issue="" it="" it.="" just="" kinda="" leave="" left="" less="" lighter="" like="" lines="" little="" look="" looking="" looks="" low="" make="" may="" model="" narrow="" neck.="" neck:="" no="" not="" odd="" of="" off="" on="" once="" one="" ones:="" only="" original="" out="" outfits="" part="" particular="" people.="" perception="" personal="" poll="" poses="" priority.="" problem.="" properly...and="" ran="" real-life="" really="" reference="" resulting="" right="" right.="" room="" rough="" screws="" seeing="" shade="" shaded="" shading="" shadowing="" she="" shoulders="" show="" skin="" skintone="" so="" so...though="" someday="" state="" still="" structure="" style="" taste.="" tend="" that="" the="" thick.="" think="" this="" to="" tone.="" toned="" tones="" too="" trouble="" try="" tweak="" up="" use="" variant="" was="" way="" weird="" well="" what="" when="" where="" with="" would="" yet.="" you="" your="">_<. again="" and="" as="" both="" feedback="" for="" had="" i="" is.="" it="" settle="" thanks="" the="" to="" tried="" ultimately="">

Nicolas

Hi, I have some things I want to mention regarding the face that it kind of bothers me a bit. First of all, the neck is a little too thick to be a female and the chin doesn't really help with that since it kind of feels like a male chins (a little too wide on my opinion). Also the head doesn't really give the sense of a real head instead it feels flat. Second, the hair looks a bit odd especially with the line that supposed to divide the hair. Third, this is a nitpick for me, but I think suits like that should show a bit more of her curves. I'm not saying all this in ill intention or making you upset instead I'm doing this to help you improve in your art quality since I've seen you been working hard on your art. Also, this is a bit late, but welcome back mate


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