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Haven's Port Main Character - Feedback Request
🕑 Added 2020-05-05 05:28:28 +0000 UTC*Update 2* Added one more redhead version and a black/red mixed version, in an attempt to satisfy Team Redhead :-p.
*Update* Based on the current batch of comments, I added another image with a darker brown and an auburn, as well as them being put in an actual scene so the colors are a bit more environment-relative. The lights are a bit overbright in the render, as I'm still tweaking the, but it's still better than being in a void, I think, for comparison.
So...I wish I could make this a poll, since that seems the most consistent way of getting lots of feedback so far :-). Unfortunately, Patreon's poll system doesn't allow you to use images, unless they are included as inline images, which just doesn't work terribly well at all (I tried, with these exact images, just to see). So...hopefully at least some of you are willing to give old fashion comments as feedback!
Essentially, I've got the main character done...except I can't decide on her hair color. Unlike the clothing, I haven't figured out any realistic way to allow it to be changed mid-game, so I want to get it right! I eliminated several colors, like various shades of blonde, as just not looking right on the figure. But I'm stuck between the three included here, Black, Brown, and Red. I'm personally a fan of redheads, as evidenced by Kiralia in Chastity Quest :-p. But, not only do I already have one red-haired protagonist going in Kiralia, I'm also aware that my appreciation for redheads is somewhat uncommon. Since the figure I've created looks just as good with Brown or Black hair, I find myself torn on which best suits her.
One additional note: The eye color isn't final. I'm not happy with any of the eye colors I have, so I've been customizing a more vivid/vibrant set. The current green is much better in that respect that the 'realistic' eyes that came with the various figures I have, but I'm not happy with it, yet. Expect the final eye color to be either a vivid green or blue, depending on which looks better with the final hair color!
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Of course, if there's any other feedback, you're welcome to mention that as well. I'm fairly happy with the face and body I've managed (though the boobs might need a touch more tweaking), but I'll at least listen to suggestions for the next few days. That said, I'm going to be 100% finalizing the figure within just 2-3 days, so if you have any opinion, don't wait on stating it! At that point, I need to move on from technical stuff into actual renders for the game intro, as well as begin the coding process!
Comments
Novus
Added another image with a darker brown and an auburn. I'm afraid the black isn't really something I can tweak, as any lighter version of black ends up looking purple or grey -_-. If you have a moment, see if you like one of the new colors better :-). And...it's awesome there are so many members of team redhead here, apparently ^_^.
Novus
Another person of fine culture! I added a darker red in another shot (this one in a proper scene). Check it out if you have a moment and let me know if you still prefer the black, or if the darker red is better :-).
George Lever
Not to quibble, but I'd like a darker brown tone, the black is too severe, the brown is a few shades too light, and the red is far too bright, auburn would work well as previously mentioned. (Also a member of Team Redheads)
FeyOne
Of the three, I'd say to go with the black hair, (third option)... though if a more auburn/darker red was an option I'd probably lean that way, (this red is too bright). I actually agree with you in being partial to red-heads, but that red is just too bright for the skin-tone and the rest of the figure where the black is a perfect match.
