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Small Changes to SS2
🕑 Added 2024-11-13 12:44:48 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
There's something I've been meaning to do for a long time now but haven't had the time. I began conceptualizing the story for SS2 over a year ago, before I had finished SS1.
Back then, I was having to deal with frequent changes in platform rules that pushed me to alter the story to avoid potential issues, but it seems those adjustments weren't enough to prevent a ban.
Now that I don't need to worry about that anymore, I've decided to return to my initial vision, which I believe is going to be an improvement to the overall story later on. So, I've made some tweaks to the original concepts of SS2:
Ryan is now officially Susan’s stepson and Tiffany’s stepbrother, rather than just someone living with them. This alteration doesn't change any significant events of the story so far, but it’s going to make the current family drama a bit more interesting in my opinion.
There were some small dialogue edits to make this change make sense in the story. However, this change will really start to matter in the upcoming chapters, beginning with Chapter 09 this Friday.
Here are the pages with modifications, along with a few other minor corrections I made along the way:
Chapter 01 - Page 06 - text change.
Chapter 01 - Page 12 - text change.
Chapter 01 - Page 16 - text change.
Chapter 01 - Page 32 - text change.
Chapter 02 - Page 34 - text added.
Chapter 04 - Page 06 - text change.
Chapter 04 - Page 08 - text change.
Chapter 04 - Page 13 - text change.
Chapter 04 - Page 15 - text change.
Chapter 04 - Page 22 - text change.
Chapter 04 - Page 25 - punctuation added.
Chapter 04 - Page 29 - text change.
Chapter 07 - Page 22 - pose/image change.
The changes were already made to the original posts and you can redownload them if you wanna see them, and I also posted a new file called SS2 Page Edits - Image Files, you can download it if you just wanna see the edited pages.
Thanks for sticking with the story, and I hope you find these changes enhance your reading experience!
