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October Short Story: Truth or Date Plus (Part 2)
🕑 Added 2023-10-10 06:51:15 +0000 UTCAlright! Time for the first short story release of October. I admit I have...mixed feelings about this one? It was fairly easy to write, which was nice. On the other hand the very confused-perspective style it's written in just sort of bothers the professional writer in me. The nature of the story makes it hard to tell from any one perspective, yet there's no way to cleanly swap between them. So it just sort of flows and warps moment to moment, in a way I hope I managed to make coherent. It's a very unprofessional style that would probably see me whacked on the nose with a newspaper by any literature teacher. Even the more free-wheeling ones.
Still, the point of these shorts is to be fun rather than formal. So long as they work, I think it's okay? Not sure how much more of this I'll right. Even if it gets votes, I'll probably only do one or two more of them. Enough for the foursome to wrap up their little party. Still, in was an interesting experiment. Which is almost always worthy of spending time on. There are, after all, only so many ways to describe sex and sexy shenanigans before I start to feel like I'm repeating myself ;-). Hence why I'm always exploring new perspectives, settings, kinks, characters, and other such things!
As always, story is attached as a PDF! Enjoy! (Hopefully!)
