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Wonderlamp (Page 435 - 442 + Credits): The Final Update

🕑 Added 2022-02-25 18:06:53 +0000 UTC

Comments

dr4c3ry

Great pull.

Steve

I feel like “Don’t Stop Believing” should be playing

MB123

I like the open ended ending.

Tiki D

Mark is sure letting his female desires leading his feelings around Peter, especially the ending.

Tiki D

I wonder if Mark/Maria would accept the rose and eventually become Peter's Girlfriend?

Filou

Great story. I doubted that will end like this. You make a conclusion who's opening so many options for Mark's future. Does (s)he got accept or reject Peter's offer? And what will happen in the both option? Does (s)he got to accept her female fate? Does (s)he going to cut is hair off again? There still some clues: The way (s)he look how Peter is strongly build now, the way (s)he's not excited about female body and the fact that (s)he wear female shirts now. I think i will make a suite in text form to please myself. Finally: Congratulation for all the work you did on your Patreon.

kendo44

Well done and congrats on a great story even with somewhat abrupt end. I know you had said this project had extended well beyond your initial idea and scope. I also feel that leaves readers more invested and expecting more in resolution in the final act. I think what you did with the Little Sister story and the additional add on pages would alleviate some of the issues in the future. Even a "What If" with possible alternate endings so you don't have to write beyond where you feel comfortable and still provide some closure to the characters. Great Job and I can't wait for your next work!

dr4c3ry

It was a great ride but the ending was disappointing.

Harley Allen

Love how real the story is. But can’t help wanting to see them accept femininity and make that change… maybe a panel of options of what life looks like down the road?

Jeffrey

Definitely need that interpretation of the end as otherwise I'm a bit irritated for it to end on that word. Otherwise really enjoyed the story, even if a bit slow at times. Great work.