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(reworked) Captives おまけ

🕑 Added 2023-01-06 12:38:13 +0000 UTC

Comments

Max

I also thought about subtitles. But then I left it again because they distract from the action. It works best without a narrator, like it used to. The sounds and the moans of the girls are much more stimulating than an explanatory narrator. Or you use it in rather quiet passages. For example, at the beginning, before the actual video starts. Or on more images at the end. Subtitles would also be less distracting on still images because the eye has time to wander without missing anything.

updated with increased narrator volume. perhaps I will add subtitles in future clips.

Thank you for your comment and suggestions! I had thought the narrator was too loud haha.. I will update the clip shortly.

Max

They were supposed to pull the narrator's soundtrack a little louder than the rest of the sound. His voice was sometimes almost drowned out by the sounds, especially the moaning of the girls in the video part (e.g. at 1m15s or 1m54s), and was therefore difficult to understand. I found it less tragic that you (?) touched the microphone once (1m17s). But the off-narrator should be understandable above all. All in all, a successful work. The movements are very fluid. I already liked your first version of the scenery. And the medieval setting with the ceremony, which comes close to a religious cult between all observers, adds a lot to the atmosphere. I look forward to your further work and wish you much success. You are extremely talented!