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The New Normal - 10-9

🕑 Added 2024-06-21 11:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Vtec

That's a fair opinion - and likely an outcome of me trying to keep it relatively balanced for both teams. However, in my head when I was writing this, I felt like I had more moments where John and Roxanne worked together than Will and Flannery. For example, there were several moments in the fight where Roxanne's Pokemon covered for John's, buying time for John to take out a key threat many times over the course of the fight. Then you had that ambush setup with Golem and Ornstein (even if it ended up not working out). And you also have the moment where Sudowoodo acted as a meatshield for Wraith to hide behind. Therefore, I'd like to *think* that I wrote in enough coordination between John and Roxanne. Perhaps it was the big Helping Hand + Eruption moment? That was the one big moment of teamwork between Will and Flannery. Still, this is just my opinion. Glad you enjoyed the chapter regardless though!

The Tallest Tree

It felt like Will and Flannerys teamwork was better than John and Roxanne... that being said I liked how Ornstein came in clutch and Wraith's good showing. I guess I'm a bit confused because the fight was too close given that John and Roxanne should've had the type advantage and coordination, you know?

KT Thompson

Amazing chapter! I loved seeing Wraiths illusions, tho these were simple they were super effective! I can’t wait to see some of the Aizen like battles John and Wraith continue to create with their ingenuity and chemistry!


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