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The New Normal - 4-19

🕑 Added 2023-08-11 11:01:54 +0000 UTC

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Shawn O

While he’s rebuilding cerulean I can totally see him having something spark with Daisy but it’s just short lived and burns out. Different visions and far different goals for what they’re striving for. The eventual ship is between Karen and John obviously but letting John experience a minor relationship of sorts and the worry it potentially brings to Karen about her own standing with him after turning him down twice. (If they’re remaining close friends she’s getting a real time feed from John about his interactions and doings while he’s working on the city, his short lived relationship, etc) It allows her to do some reflection and experience some regrets, knowing she wants something but pushes him away out of fear due to her own childhood trauma. This could potentially set Karen up to do something bold herself once she wins the conference and then when she claims the title of elite 4 (which seems to be the whole thing holding her back from a relationship in general)

Vtec

Ah, yeah I see your point. I guess this my unfamiliarity in writing romance biting me in the ass. But, in my head, Karen and John are still going to be close friends, so they'll still be hanging around each other as friends do. I like your idea of having another romantic partner, but I'm not sure if I can implement that well. If a situation arises where John forms a natural relationship, then I might go for it. Thank you for the suggestion and I'll be sure to keep it in mind.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

I like the chapter. I think you did a really good job with Will here. My only minor issue with the romance angle is the “Karen, if you want me to wait, then I’ll wait. You’re worth it.” bit. I like Karen and John as the OTP here, but she's rejected him twice now. For good reasons both times sure, but all the same, she should stand by those decisions including any consequences like her missing a shot with John. As for John, he's been turned down twice now. She's clearly not looking for romance any time soon and thats fine. But if his whole plan from here is to just try and be the guy on deck, that's kinda sad and a little creepy honestly. Let him look elsewhere for bit instead. Maybe he gets hits it off with Lorelei. Maybe John and Daisy get closer to each other while he gets involved in Cerulean politics. Maybe someone completely random we haven't seen yet that he has a passionate experience with that crashes and burns within a month. I could be wrong, but there's going to be at least 5-6 months minimum till Karen can try to win the Indigo conference next right? That's plenty of time for John to find a new romantic partner and have it end before Karen is ever even sworn in as an Elite.


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