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The New Normal - 13-14

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 12:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Vtec

Those are valid criticisms, and something I can acknowledge was down to poor planning and/or my stubborn desire to write out this scenario. Ever since I started The New Normal, this fight with Cyrus has always been in the back of my mind. I have ALWAYS wanted to write this big moment - it was a big reason why I started writing this story in the first place, aside from being inspired by Hard Enough. But as a result, some might consider things may have been too railroaded into this outcome, which I will accept is my failing as a writer. This I wholeheartedly acknowledge. Maybe if I had the writing experience that I had now when I first started this story, I could have written this a lot more dynamically. I tried doing this with the events of Team Rocket/Aqua/Magma among other plots/characters, though I guess I may have dropped the ball here. But The New Normal was my first foray into writing, and I always followed what I wanted to write first and foremost. Nevertheless, thank you very much for the comment. I appreciate you going out of your way to explaining your point, and I know that this is something I need to work on more in the future. Thanks!

RebelRob_94

LETS FCKING GOOOOPPPPPPPPPOOOOO

Middlemoe2

Man, I thought that the other three Regis needed to be absorbed or go dormant to control the Big Boi. Also I'm glad I was wrong because I thought the plates were needed to locate the Regis or would just be used in place of them to wake the Big Boi up, not actually be the Regis. Very cool detail. And last, I find all of the Regis flying, a hilarious thought. I want Regigigas to fly in Superman style and break through Space to Spear Pillar XD!

Sunniest Day

https://www.reddit.com/media?url=https%3A%2F%2Fi.redd.it%2Fugcek140ydo41.png This is all I have to say about this chapter, tytc !

PlasmaticPi

Honestly the more this goes on the less great it seems. Like for quite a while now nothing John has done has actually affected any of this. He's just been following along waiting for Cyrus to make moves, waiting to fight alongside Regigigas, with only very minor input, like the Rock Plate location, to keep things moving along. To the point where none of this is surprising or exhilarating or anything. Like its falling flat on its face. I mean we know what's next. Regigigas and Palkia have a big fight, maybe with John helping by trying to beat Cyrus or knock the red chain off Palkia, they win, Cyrus dies or is locked up, John becomes a world famous hero and leader of the Regional Union, and thats it. Basically nothing we didn't experience playing the Sinnoh games ourselves. Just feels like there should have been more differences compared to canon. And like John should have had more spotlight to influence events.

Daniel

Intense

David Green

Hell yeah, can't wait for the big fight, I was counting down the minutes to 12:00 for the chapter


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