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Rewrite...
🕑 Added 2019-07-11 16:12:24 +0000 UTCI'm still on a bit of a break but I still want to get some movement on Sibling Rivalry.
I was not feeling good about the story so I rewrote it from here on in. The new conclusion will soon be revealed but this was the original story (starting from where we left off)...
-Little Lorna angrily rebuff's Shag. Shag is shocked.
-"Even though you were screaming 'Stop', your body was screaming 'I want to be your loving and obedient wife'"
-Little Lorna says "They were BOTH screaming 'Stop'"
-Shag: "Wow, this is some strong weed!"
-Shag is pissed off and tells Luke that she refused his proposal of marriage.
-Shag pays Luke with a big bag and Luke says its a shame to sell her ass for just weed.
-Shag gets an idea to whore her away to a bunch of Croations that will pay to bang her.
-Shag tells Luke to watch some TV and he will set it up.
-Luke watches TV in another room and muses how badly he's treating Little Lorna.
-After 2 hrs, Luke emerges to find Little Lorna gone.
-Shag says he sold her away to some sex slavers just like they discussed.
-Luke is mortified but Shag says they can get her back.
-They log onto eBabe™ and say that they will just have to buy her back and pick her up in Miami
NEXT COMIC... "FIND IT ON EBABE™"
-Shag flies to Miami with his dad, Shag and Uncle bob on his business trip.
-Little Lorna is being her normal airhead self and her slavers label her as defective.
-Shag and Luke are bidding on Little Lorna who is on a video feed for the bidders to view.
- Since she is defective she is only $75.
-Little Lorna is insulted she is going for so cheap.
-She starts masterbating and the bidding skyrockets.
-Luke gets the winning bid at $25,000 and uses his dad's credit card.
-Luke and Shag pick up Little Lorna and they get a fuck out of her.
-Later, Larry yells at Luke for running up his credit card on eBabe™.
-"What were you buying on a sex for sale site?" Larry Yells.
-Little "Loren" appears and says "He bought me for you!"
-Larry is crying tears of joy while he thanks Luke.
-Little Lorna gives Luke a little wink.
END.
I attached the layout sketches. That's how I write comics! Haha. How ghetto!
I thought this was a sweet way to conclude what is a horrific experience for Little Lorna and get the whole gang out to Miami for his business trip. It seemed fun but not a lot of dirty scenes as over 75% of the panels were of Luke and Shag. I don't think it would be much fun for all of you!
Comments
Julia Sinope
But Little Lorna ALWAYS gets pregnant! Even from blow jobs!
Julia Sinope
I think I’m enjoying that character too much. Back to our relay programming after this!
Julia Sinope
I liked it too! I don’t think it would be a fun one draw because there’s a lot of visually boring scenes.
RH
Hmmmm . . . well think you were right about too much shag . . . lol . . .as that doesn't really have anything to do with siblings . . . looking forward to new version of this one!!!
Eddie Edwards
Well Little Lorna, if you belong to me now, get on down and slobber that meat for aback door treat. Can't have you getting pregnant, now can we?
Tinhy
Thanks for sharing the behind the scene content. Really insightful stuff!
Madison
This is actually really good! And I usually resent happy endings (but if you want to end on a more sinister, humiliating note, I won't object! 😉)
