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🕑 Added 2020-04-26 16:12:45 +0000 UTCI tried working on a sort of abbreviated Little Lorna style by simplifying the shapes of the arms, legs, hands and feet (including knees and ankles).
Which kind of brings me to why you guys are so important in the creation of Little Lorna comics and art! I think your critical appreciation of art is really important in its developement. I really have grown to depend on your feedback on details of the art and stories and although it may not seem like it helps make it better.
I'm not sure if any of you fellas draw but an artist's mind gets tunnel vision and a sort of blindness to the finished piece. That's why most artists flip their art or look at it in the mirror or come back to the drawing after a few hours to look at it with "Fresh" eyes. I am REALLY lucky to have you guys! You are pros at looking at erotic art and in particular Little Lorna in the nude! That first look that you guys get when I first post anything is very VERY important!!! Its like when you're cooking. You are constantly enveloped by the smells and constantly tasting it and that first taste that someone else gets will give you very important advise. Too spicy? More salt? Needs more time cooking?
Don't feel hesitant for sending a note on any art. I sometimes try your idea out, or I may save your comment for another artwork or I may full on disagree but it all helps! In this one Sally said there was something wrong with the head size and didn't like the abbreviated breasts and VOILA... I think she was absolutely right (second image). It was so minor that I didn't notice.
Thanks everyone for you small little inputs into the art and the stories.
Comments
Eddie Edwards
Liked the boobies on the first one and the head on the second one
William Savage
The simplified version damned her hair shading & right-breast form.
Daring Warlock
Comparing between Lorna 1 and Lorna 2, Lorna 2 head is more proportion to her body but with her breast you can have more wiggle room. Depending how you want her lookalike. you can either have Lorna 2 smaller but more natural looking breast or Lorna 1 more shapely and implant looking breast. You could even do a comic story on Lorna get new breast.
RH
Agree, I like the shape of breast better and the smaller head in 2nd image . . . tho feet and hands look bigger than usual in both . . . either way yeah if she showed up at my door . . . heh
John Charles Psota
I like Lorna1 because she has nicer breasts. Something to get a hold of! :)
Avery McCreedy
If I opened my door and found Little Lorna standing there, naked, being like "Here I am !"
Jamie W
I think the second one looks more realistic, whereas the first one looks unrealistic and cartoonish (yes it's a comic book but still)
