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The Clinic: Going Up the Ranks
🕑 Added 2024-04-22 13:50:46 +0000 UTCHey all! Work's been a bit crazy for me so this took a little longer than expected and then another couple of days to actually get a free moment to upload it, but here's a commission for Ceebrupt, the fifth Clinic story. A rookie cop wishes he got a bit more respect around the station. Good thing Dr. Mode is here to help.
I don't know that it necessarily comes across, but lately I've been doing a lot of learning about improving my writing craft. Read Jeff Vandermeer's Wonderbook, and am currently in the middle of a video course taught by one of my favourite authors, the incomparable Alan Moore. I'm trying my best to take on board what I've seen, so hopefully it shows!
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Baldier
I've read many works with the same themes, and this is the first time I've seen someone use scars before, and using them to signify veterancy/experience is very original!
S
Wonderbook is a truly amazing resource, it is awesome to hear that you gave it a read!
