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UTBW: Ch. 89

🕑 Added 2025-05-08 19:14:43 +0000 UTC

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Hersh Jobanputra

I concur. The story now is incredibly slow paced and boring. The MC come off as a douche because we don’t know why he is doing what he is doing?

Smush

I am sorry but i was so hyped for this story, but once your transmigrated to Naruto world it has been a grind to read. Its only been a few days since the rebellion and yet over 40+ chapter written about it. The first bit with him fighting was cool. Now he comes of very unsympathetic and for a main character that is not good. Hopefully you will at some point get back to the One piece world because frankly that was the main reason i decided to subscribe. Don´t get me wrong you are a good writer and the first 30 chapters where amazing and i loved reading them.

Hersh Jobanputra

I think the past 15 chapters are so the story has been a little slow paced. That is kind of making the story a little bit meh. But if you can handle the pace, that would be awesome.


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