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Breathe Chapter 47: Rollercoaster

🕑 Added 2025-02-10 05:04:15 +0000 UTC

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SkulduggeryHaven

I'm glad you enjoyed. it. Really good breakdown on how the Grimm operates... I really like the name you've dubbed it with. The Shrapnel Weaver has a nice ring to it.

HunterWithPatience

Wonderful chapter, love the fact the coal is scared of spiders even after all the strength he's gained, keeps him down to earth, or rather keeps him down to Remnant. Also I dub thus spider grimm the "Shrapnel Weaver" this old grimm slightly disables other grimm and puts them in the path it knows that it's prey likes to traverse. It will mainly target trains and low flying airship. It will use its web to keep its tool grimm in the middle of the path and also to attack and trap its prey, it will then proceed to Tear apart the vehicles it has traped and use the parts it likes best to add it to its amour.

SkulduggeryHaven

Thank you.

nasapeepolover116

That was one of the best ideas i've had ever see them a fan fiction for rwby

SkulduggeryHaven

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Radiant Tiefling

Thank you for the chapter.

The Foreign Traveler

I’m glad for that, so many Writers just “jump” into the good stuff without their being an emotional and trustworthy bond between the people in a multi or polyamorous relationship. Glad you’re taking your time…makes it all the more satisfying to read.

SkulduggeryHaven

That was actually one of my main inspirations for the fight. I've never actually played the game before, but I've seen quite a bit of it on youtube and decided to make a Grimm out of it.

SkulduggeryHaven

Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed the fight. This is a multi-relationship pairing, so Coal is going to get involved with others as well, but I'm focused on making it feel organic, so other pairings aren't going to happen instantly, but they are going to happen. The more he interacts with the girls, the closer they'll become.

Vidalva

My first thought through this fight was the game choo-choo Charles

The Foreign Traveler

Our boy sure is getting lucky with some of the girls eh? Pyrrha, Yang, Winter and so on…even if this won’t turn out to be a multi-relationship (There is Yang potentially after what happened at the mine), Coal’s bond with the girls will still deepen after all the experiences they’ve been through which is still nice. Awesome chapter and fight. Then again, I remember the label on Fanfic being “OC, Pyrrha N., Winter S, so I’m likely wrong about Yang.

SkulduggeryHaven

The nope Grimm... I like the sound of that, lol.

Phanthom Fox 12

I dub this grim The Nope. Because NOPE, YOU CAN'T MAKE ME FIGHT IT CLOSE RANGE! Cuddles to warm up... Hehehehehe

SkulduggeryHaven

You're welcome. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Matthew Gonzales

Thanks for the chapter.


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