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Breathe Chapter 52: Dead Reach

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 04:41:34 +0000 UTC

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SkulduggeryHaven

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Radiant Tiefling

Thank you for the chapter.

Vidalva

Thank you!

Phanthom Fox 12

Ao3 Wind Hero Wanderer

Vidalva

I’m interested in your story phanthom, can you tell me where to read it please?

SkulduggeryHaven

And Ruby would naturally be a little more resistant to the Grimm due to her Silver Eyes... She and Qrow would be looking for a way to get rid of the Grimm once and for all. That'd be a pretty sweet zombie apocalypse story without needing to get rid of Grimm in order to make it possible.

HunterWithPatience

Heh, with the timing on the village destruction, cause you said it was nearly a decade ago. Could have been a telltale walking dead type situation but instead of lee and clementine, it's ruby and qrow.

SkulduggeryHaven

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Yeah, that's pretty much my idea on how the town was overrun. The tree Grimm found the pool which was beginning to spawn Chill and used it to bolster itself, before slowly working its way up, creating an opening in the place where most of the town gathered at once... The church. If given enough time and bodies, it would have become something like the Ancient Grimm in Mistral, but luckily the town was isolated enough that it never came to pass, otherwise Vale would have experienced a Zombie apocalypse.

HunterWithPatience

Thanks, also, great chapter by the way. I really liked the combat and the grimm you come up with. My theory on how this disaster came to be is that both grimm in a extremely lucky coincidence (or unlucky depending on how to look at it) came into the town at the same time and the tree grimm found the pool and then with the chill destroyed the village as you described. With the possible that this grimm in particular was able to get smarter by feeding on the grimm pool, which made it a strong opponent as well as being able to work with the chill by being able to help keep it alive and help with its production of more chill by yet again, useing the grimm pool.

SkulduggeryHaven

That's a pretty cool description and name for the Grimm and I love the backstory that you made, linking it to the great war where it'd have more than enough corpses to use.

HunterWithPatience

Shadebark Stalker: these grimm are incredibly rare, one of them only being found every 10 to 15 years. Long ago during the great war, a soldier had found a small version of this grimm growing out of a pile of corpses that had piled up after a skirmish. So it is theorized that this grimm somehow travels as a small seed type grimm, and finds corpses to grow from. After it has grown it will blend in with a surrounding forrest (note 1: this grimm, even though it has the appearance of a tree, can still walk useing it's root like tendrils) it will then feed off of animals and humans by useing its appearance as a tree ( Note 2: this grimm has the capability to camouflage itself into the appearance of the surrounding trees) to sneak attack it's victims. To also add, in most of the reports of this grimm, it was found stalking prey and is found to be incredibly quiet when stalking it's prey,

SkulduggeryHaven

That it is. I'm sure I will. I really liked the scene with Wanderer humbling Endeavor during the sports festival, that was great.

Phanthom Fox 12

I suggest trying DMC 5 with the DLC, it's an amazing game. Thanks, hopefully you'll like the later chapters

SkulduggeryHaven

I haven't played as him in DMC 5, but I did a full playthrough in DMC 3 using his character and it ended up being really fun. I've read about a quarter way through your story and I've really been enjoying it. Wanderer's calm personality also reminds me a little of early Virgil.

SkulduggeryHaven

Thanks, that's what I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yeah, sure. Weiss is definitely going to get a few more songs. One thing in particular that I'm looking forward to writing is Beacon's Dance and the leadup to it, especially the interaction with Weiss during it.

Phanthom Fox 12

Yeah, I played as him in the DLC, he has a unique play style, I heavily inspired Wanderer with him in my story, I just love his sword style

Django_ti

"Ethereal arms on shoulders" made me think of Nero when he unlocks his Devil Trigger. Great chapter, btw; keep it up! Do you think coal is gonna give Weiss another song? Something like "die with a smile" by Bruno mars and lady gaga

SkulduggeryHaven

Now there's a cool idea. I somehow completely forgot that Virgil could do that. One idea I was toying with this chapter was giving Coal Virgil's Judgment Cut, but decided to go with Nero's devil trigger.

Phanthom Fox 12

Heh, if only Coal could replicate Virgil's astral swords, then he'd have long range options

SkulduggeryHaven

Thanks, that's exactly what I was going for, having Coal replicate a portion of Nero's devil trigger from DMC. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Phanthom Fox 12

Wow this is a good one! I'm surprised by the end attack, the astral hands on his shoulders remind me of Nero from DMC 5, amazing work!


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