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Breathe Chapter 65: Fairy tales

🕑 Added 2025-06-16 04:40:11 +0000 UTC

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SkulduggeryHaven

I was wondering why I hadn't heard from you again, but I figured it was probably work related. Damn, sounds like you've had a stressful few week. I've worked as a waiter before, so I know how busy restaurants can get, especially on holidays like Valentines day or when sports are involved. Honestly, I'm interested to seeing anything you have to write about the Grimm. Both ideas have merit. If you feel up to it, you could always combine both ideas... Have it so that the found footage of the Grimm is being used to enter it into a database for future reference. One of the upsides for the found footage is that you could show just how terrifying the Grimm is to others. For those like Coal, Winter and Pyrrha, it was still dangerous, but ultimately nothing that they couldn't handle. For regular Huntsmen and Huntresses though, it'd be a whole other terrifying story. One of the inspirations for the Grimm in this arc was the creature from The Ritual. A found footage version of that could show just how bad the Grimm actually was. The pure description of the Grimm on the other hand has the advantage of being able to go outside of the box and give straight up description s of everything the Grimms been up to, regardless of if it was ever recorded or not. Anyways, both ideas are pretty interesting. I look forward to what you have to write about the Grimm.

HunterWithPatience

This was a very calming chapter, very much needed after the very creepy and action packed chapters before this one, very good, P.S. you might have wondered why I took so long to read this chapter why I haven't made a description for the grimm from the previous chapter. And well the short awnser is work. Long awnser, I work in a restaurant as a line cook, of which the restaurant has a sports bar attached, I live in the city of the hockey team, that lost the Stanly cup earlier tonight, so for the past few weeks, with the Stanly cup finals, my work place has been...busy. so with that now over, it should calm down. And I'll be working on that grimm description, and as a final note, when it comes to that grimm description, since it's a completely unique grimm, and it appears there have been no survivors for anyone who encounters it,( untill now ) there's nothing really to go off of in terms of past encounters, so I could either base it off your story's encounter of the grimm, or I was thinking about writing something similar to a found footage oneshot for this grimm, and I would like you opinion on it.

SkulduggeryHaven

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Radiant Tiefling

Thank you for the chapter.


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