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Breathe Chapter 68: Now and Then

🕑 Added 2025-07-07 04:59:54 +0000 UTC

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SkulduggeryHaven

You're welcome. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.

Radiant Tiefling

Thank you for the chapter. Good work as always.

SkulduggeryHaven

No worries dude, you don't need to stress yourself over the one shot. I'm just glad to hear back from you after so long. I hope everything's going alright with your personal situations that you mentioned. It seems you had a pretty neat idea there, even if you didn't complete it, you still wrote a full 5.500 words which is pretty impressive in of itself. Whether you decide to finish it or not ultimately lies with you. If you want, I have a few tips that I've learnt while writing that could help you out if you want to continue.

HunterWithPatience

Hello, awesome chapter, and hello I'm back, it's been awhile, I know i know, you've missed me. Your probably wondering where I went after not commenting on the last couple chapters, and long story short, it was a mix of trying to write that one shot about that grimm from a fre chapters ago, and a lot of personal situations that really stressed me out, but yesterday I was able to catch up on the new chapters (all amazing btw) and also read the two chapters of your new story, (which also really good, I think I'll be reading that story as well). Now back onto the grimm story I was writing, personally I don't really see my self as a good writer and I also suffer from procrastination, as well as not really coming up with a good name that i really liked for this grimm to have and after sitting down only 3 times to write I havint really even come close to finished, and personally I don't really think I ever will sadly, because what I have down currently is over 5,500 words and I don't even feel like I'm half way finished so I don't think I'll be finishing it, of which I sincerely apologize, but to tell you the main premise of the plot of the story, MC (not coal, the guy who was gonna be the guy who write down information on grimm and what not) shows up to work, enters his office, a group of huntsman enter ( the scavengers) they bring stuff from the scene of the grimm encounter, and Coals report of what happend with a large amount of expunged data to protect the identity of team rwby and winter and pyrrha along with some important info regarding salem and the war, he then reads your report, and the he goes over the countless things that grimm was hordeing, the most important stuff being old scrolls from huntsman groups who have died trying to track this grimm, the footage on those scrolls shows at first certain members of the groups filming and after some time it shows other team members turning on the rest of the team and attempting to kill them because the grimm could take over people's minds with its nightmares, and also the grimm itself attacking and after just a few of those videos, he finally writes down the grimm description and it's abilities before granting it a recommended name, of which I coulding find one that I was happy with, the best one I came up with was story taker but that name was in reference to the fact that it summoned a fairly tale monster, so in terms of the plot of my story it wouldint have worked, so yeah that was the basic premise of the thing I was gonna write, again I'm sorry but I just don't think I'll ever get around to finishing it, but I'll continue to read and I'll probably just give a basic grimm description to it next chapter.


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