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Pushing Through the Limit Chapter 23: Boned

🕑 Added 2024-04-12 04:49:39 +0000 UTC

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savitar

In my opinion each Biju has a power that makes it unique. Shukaku and the sand. Matatabi and the blue fire. Isobu and the coral. They are Goku and the lava. Kokuo and the steam. Saiken and acid. Chomei is not clear. Gyuki says it's just the ink. But what about Kurama? The detection of negative emotions has to do with the Yin chakra and Naruto's regeneration with the Yang chakra, so in my opinion it has to do with enhancing both aspects in the jinchuriki. and with Naruto being his jinchuriki as well as the son of the previous jinchuriki I think he has enormous potential

Aritra Roy

Man, for the longest time, I personally assumed that the Kyuubi's cloak is just his special ability, like how the other 8 bijuu have some form of special elemental release. It took me years to find a forum post that actually asked why Naruto's cloak is so unique, and it was only then that I learned Minato basically created the one and only perfect Jinchuriki seal. I can't be the only fan of Naruto who is disappointed in Kishimoto for not drawing more attention to clever details like this, because while the man and his team had a lot of creativity, by the time the Kyuubi's cloak was revealed, Kishi focused way too much on raw power.

Hersh Jobanputra

Nah not if the Yamanaka can erase their memories and implant new ones or just reform them.

savitar

merging NE with the village is not a good idea. They are fanatically loyal to Danzo and could cause problems. As cold as it may seem, you have to get rid of them, unfortunately.

SkulduggeryHaven

Glad to hear that you're enjoying the story. Danzo's going to be dealt with, he's not going to be allowed to run around for too long.

Hersh Jobanputra

Also, please kill Danzo fast he is not that strong if you do not give him prep time and know about his aces. If one blitzes him he does not have time to deactivate the seals on his arm. Furthermore Shisui's eye is in the same boat he needs time to activate kotoamatsukami. Finally you can kill Danzo and then merge his root to the village active ninjas to give Konoha a boost during this time. If two major threats are out of the way, then you only have to focus on the Akatstuki. in the manga the way, Obito lost is just plot armor. You can make it more balanced in your story because Obito lost with seven tailed beasts, rinnegan, kamui, gedo mazo, reanimations, and being a ten tailed jinchuriki. You can make it so that obito has four maybe five tail beasts and a health Nagato is alive during the war arc. That would make it a much more compelling story and more balanced rather than just throwing plot armor at the story. Killing Danzo and Orochimaru effective because you can use their resources to combat Obito. Obito is a huge threat that was understated in the manga because they wanted to make Madara a greater threat. I mean, he lost to Kakashi and he had a rinnegan and kamui. I really like your writing style and I very excited to read what you write next.

Hersh Jobanputra

Yes please if possible please make him learn fuinjutsu not only because it is very versatile and overpowered. But also becuase it is Naruto's inheritance from the Uzumaki clan and his parents who were both seal masters.

Asriyel

👀 Prisão infinita aquele que tem a caixa enorme 🤤 outro top é o bijuu de 0 caudas

savitar

so that the importance of Fuinjutsu can be seen. He tell me that Naruto is going to be learning Fuinjutsu. Not just because of his father's jutsu. so many possible applications. Can you imagine a sword that contains the elements of wind and fire at the same time? talks about a dangerous blade and that's just an example damn There are so many possibilities in this fic that it is incredible and Naruto has many things to exploit to benefit Do bets start on how much Danzo tries to get his hands on Kimimaro?

Meruem Astro

“Kurama’s actively spending his time watching cartoons and paraphrasing wisdom from a dog named Jake… So this world is weirder than mine.” this was hilarious


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