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Behind the scenes: Day 4 (spoilers)
🕑 Added 2020-01-10 07:03:53 +0000 UTCBefore I begin with this post. I'd like to mention that it does contains spoiling of events for the 4th day of the re-imagined chapter 1 turned into days. There is new events added and choices being added to these days. You have been warned! Only read if you don't mind spoiling the test for day 4 in a summary.
Day 4 - Section 1 (Teary eyed surprise)
Starts off in the classroom, we learn that John has another little project in mind for his students. Which turns out to be a cosplay dress up project, yet again just without a set theme. John mentions that a girl named Lola worked very hard to make these outfits and so he wants the students to try them on and get graded for it. The class isn't very excited about the idea, partners are set up once again and Brandon finds himself stuck with Heather. But John reminds her quickly that she's already got three strikes against her this week, one more will call for a punishment. This little bit of information, makes it so she has to watch how she acts, she gets her outfit ready and makes him look away while getting changed. But she ends up having some issues getting her outfit zipped up and has to request for him to help her out. Her luck runs out shortly after getting the outfit on as her tummy begins to rumble and an accident happens, Brandon finds this to be a great time for payback from when she bullied Erika. But it causes her to cry and run off, with a choice of deciding to try hunting her down to check on her or not.
Day 4 - Section 2 (Hello Nurse!) (nurse intro)
During the day, Brandon ends up messing himself and has to get his diaper changed by the nurse. He's been here before off screen, but it's the first time on screen we see the nurse. She ends up teasing him lightly about his messy diaper and asks for him to wait while she cleans up the table area to change him, going behind a curtain area. After waiting, she calls for him to come over there and she's on the ground reaching for something she dropped. This gives him a nice upskirt view of her skirt, where he sees a wet spot on her panties and can't help himself getting stiff under his diaper. She then is able to grab the item and requests for him to get on the table, but he can't make his stiffy go away in time before she undoes his diaper. This shocks her, but also causes her to ask if he'd like for her to help him out. The choices are there to decline or accept, by accepting she gives him a handjob and slight blowjob. Then the voice of a familiar girl calls out from the other side of the curtain for the nurse, as the nurse is only able to cover his dick with the front of his diaper before we see Nova turn the corner and she's shocked/embarrassed. But she doesn't see anything naughty, after the nurse helps Brandon into his new diaper and he's about to leave. The nurse is helping Nova with her dirty diaper and mentions that Nova wishes to speak with him, so don't leave. He learns that Nova is practicing kickboxing later tonight and wants him to come check it out.
Day 4 - Section 3 (Fierce dancing)
We see Brandon show up to the gym, where three girls (nova, allie and rosa) are standing around with some kickboxing equipment and bags. Nova introduces him to her two club members and friends, before starting their practice. While Nova's kickboxing, the other two talk and end up distracting Nova to cause he to fall on her butt. The two girls calm down but talk a little bit more, until Nova is finished and she asks Brandon if he liked it. The other girls tease him and Nova a little bit, before Nova forces Allie to practice. Which then we focus on Nova and Rosa talking about how the club was formed and how they met. This ends up with Allie tagging Rosa in for her practice time and Allie mentions how Nova tried out for cheerleading before the club began, making fun of Nova. Rosa soon joins back with them and they all chat a bit, before Nova notices how late it's getting and has the two girls begin cleaning up. Nova chats with Brandon a bit more before joining her friends and Brandon heads for his dorm.
Behind the scenes notes
*Heather's section was really fun to do because it shows her in a different light than what we're used to seeing. I think everyone who likes or even dislikes Heather should end up having some fun with that section, just based on how she has to watch her tone in the class.
*The choice for Heather's section came naturally, I knew that I wanted the choice to affect her affection. But with how the scene plays out, I felt it's very fitting to chase after her or choose not to. Those who want to see more of Heather or like her as their focus will most likely chase her and those who don't care for her won't chase her.
*One thing I hope we're doing in a good way is the background students and mentions of them at times for sections. I've heard that people like how they're mentioned and not a forgotten part of the world in the game, as some games don't really take them into account.
*The nurse section is one of our first interesting ones, because it shows a different focus for a section compared to the other previous sections. Pretty much the nurse sections will be seen as sexual focused and those who choose to engage in these acts with the nurse will fall deeper into her mini route until there's no return. It's intended that the game will suddenly end very briefly if you get to the end of the nurse's route, because of the story reasons and the nature of her route focus. (can't make her a girlfriend)
*I think the nurse will be a nice little bonus for those looking for the classical milf aspect missing from the game.
*With Nova's section I think it's my favorite for day 4. I was worried at first on how to handle the focus of the kickboxing practice without it feeling boring or how to really do it without just watching them, etc. Plus the fact it introduces her two friends and club members, but as I began writing from the moment Nova begins practicing to the end. I ended up not being able to stop myself and it turned out roughly 2100-2200 word count instead of 1500. <.< I think with how everything is handled for this section, it's very fun and should come off in some nice comedy happening.
*Little fun fact, Allie and Rosa were actually introduced before by Uncle Artie (our editor) who felt the duo would help with Nova's character building. I was a little nervous to write for them, seeing I didn't fully come up with them myself and wanted to keep their personalities in check. Needless to say, it would seem I managed to handle it okay. ^^
*Fun side note, this section was almost done being written and edited before day 3 was finished. This is because Zoey's section and the troubles of how to write for her character before changing her a bit, plus the scene play for her section not helping too much either.
*Section 1 is completely new and replaces the whole scene from chapter 1 with Heather in the punishment room. I felt that I could and still can have that sort of scene play for a section later on, but when thinking about Heather's intro. I felt after players first impressions of her, that by switching things up a little to show a more toned down calm version of her being forced for the scene would be very fitting. It'd give players a better feeling for her character instead of seeing her as a one toned feeling each time she's on screen.
*Section 2 roughly takes the idea from chapter 1 when Erika showed Brandon the nurses office and had his diaper changed. Of course with some new details in mind for the "reboot" some stuff was swapped around, so instead we have Brandon going on his own and it's meant to be seen as his first on screen visit (he has many off screen visits before this). Ideally I don't feel forcing each and every visit for a diaper change during sections that don't need it, would really just take away from other sections instead of just taking the hint that when characters have dirty diapers. They take care of them off screen at the nurse's office.
*Section 3 this area is completely new and actually replaces where I was going to have the scene where Brandon was back at Erika's dorm room (after Heather punished him). Of course that wouldn't fit anymore with the events going on, plus I felt if I kept a Erika section here in her dorm room just a few days after her first dorm room section with her. It would've ended up feeling really lackluster and lazy on our part to go with something like that. The choice to give Nova some extra screen time here in day 4 felt pretty fitting, Rachel could've worked but she has a section in day 5 planned. Bridget's intro was being considered here, but I really liked the old intro for Bridget with how it happened. It won't be the same but it'll still have Erika introduce Brandon to her. (Miki, Erika and Heather of course I felt didn't need placed in this section after the previous focuses on them already so far.)
(Be on the look out for behind the scenes day 5 soon enough!) (This should cover Bridget's intro, a Rachel section and classroom punishment!) ^^
